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Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 2 weeks ago

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I love when he touches my body. 

Tonight his hand crawled deep into my skirt. He touched my p...sy.

It felt right. His hand was always meant to be there between my lips.

I had a vision before of his hand between my thighs.

Tonight it came true. It was realized. 

I love when his hand gors up my chest and squeezes my neck. Like it belongs to him.

Like he out to take the breath out me.

Be my man.

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    Yuck... Can you at least hide it a bit.

    Re-productionBetween hidden lips,Your love strokesA springing fountain,The fountain of youthIt's eternal, immoral,Like a raging river, aCliche for the species.More comes out, more come.They catch the doeWith her eyes frozenIn the headlights, of sorrow.Too late now, the eveningNo longer shows you starsBut a dark space that you Know, took place 18 years ago, 36 years lower.Where the comet now cries,Please, please don't show!

    Tell me no more, for I died

    100 years ago... 

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