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Lv 6
What do you think of this poem?
Do you like it? What should the title be?
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From tears of April
'Till the warm smiles of June
Come the breaths of May
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- 9 years agoFavourite answer
Line 2, use "warming"
in a 5 - 7 - 5 Haiku which I want to assume you tried, it is enjoyable
Does it need a title?
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